Paul deMarco gave feedback on THE RIGHT TIME FOR ME

Great to hear the organ in this! i really like the lyrics… i wonder though if those chorus lines should end right time rather than you… stretch out the time.. then the final line just adds the For me…? just a thought… really like it!

Paul deMarco gave feedback on I want To Drink a Beer With You

Love how this comes in… good demo… i wonder if it would kick a bit more if the verse and chorus melody had a different ryhthm and meter to each other… so maybe one is wordy and one is drawn out? just a thought… like that bridge and killer solo... Read More

Paul deMarco gave feedback on For the Last Time

Brave to have a changing chorus… great melody and solid demo… felt like maybe verse 3 should be a bridge… really good vocal (so much so that i think you can beat how you phrase “sports page” but im being picky cos its so very good)... all the best with it

Paul deMarco gave feedback on Who You Ridin With

mate like this! contemporary and great vocal style… a tighter 808 might improve it even more.. good song!!

Paul deMarco gave feedback on DEAR WHISKEY

Great idea for lyric! Well delivered ????????