Joined: July 30, 2013
Dave Likes: 10 Songs
Dave Undis gave feedback on My Baby's Gone
I like this song, but you shouldn’t say “it’s 8 am in the morning”. It’s redundant. You could say “it’s 8 o’clock in the morning”.
Dave Undis gave feedback on Hotter
I think there is a growing market for songs for older artists and audiences. Very nice job on this one.
Dave Undis gave feedback on So Long
Very nice.