A woman has left me
I like this song, but you shouldn’t say “it’s 8 am in the morning”. It’s redundant. You could say “it’s 8 o’clock in the morning”.
August 06, 2013
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Nice stuff Travis. Very similar to the type of music I write. I think we have a number of other great songwriters on Frettie too that I think would be great to connect with.
June 06, 2013
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I like this song, but you shouldn’t say “it’s 8 am in the morning”. It’s redundant. You could say “it’s 8 o’clock in the morning”.
August 06, 2013
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Nice stuff Travis. Very similar to the type of music I write. I think we have a number of other great songwriters on Frettie too that I think would be great to connect with.
June 06, 2013
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