Bob Abner gave feedback on Hard to Hurt

Nice song—“If you don’t fill up life’s suitcase, it’s just a wasted trip” is a great line, the sort of line I see in your songs fairly often!!!  Good song, though for some reason, the song felt a little “loose” (not tightened up enough, I... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on Going Going Gone

“Keep her on that train running out of track”—nice line!  Also, I liked the fact that you ended the song on the 4 chord!

Bob Abner gave feedback on God’s Little Half Acre

Of course I agree with EVERY sentiment in this set of lyrics—the only problem, imho, is that it seems you’re beating people over the head with truth (both musically as well as lyrically)—the listener doesn’t get to really do a process of discovery if you lead... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on Broken Glass

Very nice—it touches the heart as it scorches the mind—very solid—now I think I’l go and SLIT MY WRISTS—no, of course, I’m only joking —I do (again) think this is a VERY touching song—my hat’s off to you!!!

Bob Abner gave feedback on Miracle Pill

Marvin, have listened to this one a number of times—VERY SOLID—one small thought—I might have been tempted to “simplify/thin out” the instrumentation on the last chorus (so as to possibly make it feel slightly more intimate and personal), but that is a very small suggestion—I... Read More