Joined: July 8, 2018
Carol Likes: 2 Songs
Carol Katterjohn gave feedback on This Bed Has Held Us Before
Sandra, Love it. One point. The second verse does not seem to follow the theme of the song. Although beautiful, I was expecting more about the bed holding them vs a need for a change in seasons?
Carol Katterjohn gave feedback on Wisdom
Sandra, GREAT imagery! His hands shook, walls packed with jars…nuts and bolts, etc. Nice job. The only line that gave me pause was, ‘Everything that is once was a puzzling dilemma’. Not sure what this means or how it fits in? Music fits it well.
Carol Katterjohn gave feedback on Up
Nice!