Joined: June 1, 2018
Ditalian Likes: 5 Songs
Vocals, Lyrics
Smokey Robinson, Stevie Wonder, Lionel Richie, Holland/Dozier/Holland, Ashford & Simpson, Marvin Gaye, Prince, Michael Jackson, George Michael, Sting, Mariah Carey, Stevie Nicks, Alanis Morissette, Hal David/Burt Bacharach, Carole King, Lennon/McCartney, Ashley Gorley, Shane McAnally, Brett James, Luke Laird, Hillary Lindsey, Gretchen Peters, Matraca Berg, Lisa Palas, Mark D. Sanders, Sara Light, Craig Bickhardt, Tom Shapiro, Bobby Braddock, Beth Nielsen Chapman, Diane Warren, Babyface, Bruce Springsteen, Billy Sherrill, Hugh Prestwood, Vince Gill, Alan Jackson, Clint Black, Mary-Chapin Carpenter, Craig Wiseman, Mark D. Sanders, Bob DePiero, Don Schlitz, Jon Ims, Ralph Murphy, Brent Baxter, Jason Blume, Tom Douglas, Marty Dodson, Lori McKenna, Liz Rose, Barbara Cloyd, Robin Frederick. John/Taupin, Bill Withers
Ditalian Cole gave feedback on DID YOU EVER HAVE A SON
Good song, Jack. I can tell from the lyric that you lived this song. However, there are spots where the lyric is awkward and not conversational. like in the lines, “over all things ever known,” and “you shared in what you earned”
Ditalian Cole gave feedback on Alone Tonight
Good guitar melody. Clear lyric, except the line,“Got nowhere to go, nothin to spend but time..” There, I’m not quite sure what you mean.
Ditalian Cole gave feedback on Fire in The Ice (Revised)
What an interesting title! Made me want to know what the song was all about. However, the pronouns confused me. I’m not sure I understand who the she, he, I, and you are. It’s a cool idea, but could stand another rewrite.
Ditalian Cole gave feedback on ENDLESSLY WITH ME
Beautiful, touching song. Makes me remember deceased loved ones. I can tell the song comes from a real place. For some reason, I feel the title should be “Endless With Me” instead of “Endlessly With Me” because it makes better sense to me.
Ditalian Cole gave feedback on MY FLORIDA HOME
The lyric takes me to Florida and makes me feel like I’m there. I like your use of alliteration and internal rhymes. Melodically, the music is the same in the chorus as the verses. Also, the music sounds like it’s from a different era.