Haydee Ahrens gave feedback on Gone

This song is structured a little differently than what I’m used to. Seems you repeated the verses not the chorus. Just an observation, not a criticism. I think the main thing for me is that lyrics get sticky a bit and don’t flow in certain parts. The melody... Read More

Haydee Ahrens gave feedback on A Mother's Special Day

So there was a lot of really sweet sentiments here. Surely your mom would love this song. I like the line, “Dad built a house, mom made a home”. One thing a lot of women will take issue with is saying she had no skills. It sounds like she cooked... Read More

Haydee Ahrens gave feedback on Duke It Out

I’m like you in a lot of ways, I don’t play instruments. This was a great attempt at a melody, a solid start. It’s kind of a rowdy song, fun in It’s own way. Yes, I’m definitely getting a Bon Jovi vibe from it now... Read More

Haydee Ahrens gave feedback on Life Was Fantastic With You

I am also sorry for your loss. This song was very good. Your voice, the melody, the lyrics, etc. It seems this is one of those songs where everything came together and made everything just right. I really wish there were more people like your friend and that I could... Read More

Haydee Ahrens gave feedback on Rise Again (Country Pop Mix)

The melody sounds catchy. The lyrics have a good flow. I do understand some of Frank’s feedback. One way to really highlight the overcoming of struggles is to outline what some of the struggles are. Contrasts between dark and light can help, especially when you see all the obstacles... Read More