Bobby Davis gave feedback on Heaven Made

Thanks DeeDee.  I wrote the “Tha Thumps” into the lyrics. I suppose a bass drum would work.  I would probably do both to make it more prominent.  Again, thanks for your comments.

Bobby Davis gave feedback on Heaven Made

Thanks Adrian. The song was sung by my computer using AI. Maybe I should have put that in the comments section.  I don’t think you are the only one writing and performing your songs.  Many folks don’t like AI but for a lyricist its an awesome... Read More

Bobby Davis gave feedback on That Old Grey Dog and Me

nice melody & flowing lyrics. Good job!

Bobby Davis gave feedback on Then Comes the Night

Marvin…obviously you are really talented so I’m gonna be nick picky here.  More word smithing than anything.  Great Melody, Great Song.  Don’t think you need the word “just” in either the first verse or the second.  Actually think you can take it completely... Read More

Bobby Davis gave feedback on BABY, COME HOME

nice flow, very smooth voice.  One line I thought might could be improved on….Can’t stop my brain from thinking”...I might try…can’t remove you no matter what I’m thinking”.