Joined: February 3, 2018
Frank Likes: 56 Songs
Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Who's the Matter With You
Reid, I’m sorry for my undifferentiated remark, I don’t like that myself. I think your idea is good, but the lyric lacks emotional depth. You can make the lyric stronger if you show us how much it hurts to realize that she has found someone else and that... Read More
Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Who's the Matter With You
Hey Reid, your song has a nice Pop/Soul feel, reminds me a bit to SIMPLY RED. A saxophone would be a good fit to play some fills and maybe the solo. The lyric is a bit plain and could use some tweaks.
Frank Renfordt gave feedback on There Are More Of Us Then There Are Of Them (9-11 Song)
When you visit the 9/11 museum, in the shop area you can buy T-shirts with a print on it: LOVE IS STRONGER THAN HATE. Great message. Your song reminded me immediately to this. However, I would have liked that message to be stronger and clearer in your song.
Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Wild at Heart
Hi Tommy, the verse melody reminded me at once to ‘House of the Rising Sun’, maybe you should try to change it a bit. I like the song idea! I think this should be a Rock song or at least heavy Country Rock.
Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Tiny Angel (feat. Suzy Alexman)
Hi Allen, nice song! I agree with Sam - with Freddie Mercury on vocals it would sound like QUEEN.