Frank Renfordt gave feedback on WHAT I KNOW NOW

Hi Jack, As a father of four and a little more mature, I can identify with your song. These are wise and true words you have found. What I don’t like that much about the song is the loud voice in the in chorus coming out of nowhere, it’... Read More

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on FUNERALS & BIRTHDAYS

Hi Jack,  a nice idea, I have also some people I met unfortunately on funerals only. I think the song would have a better emotional impact if you would show us more about the relationship, some things you have done in the past together - maybe she was even... Read More

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Cried Like Rain

Hi Jack, this is a very emotional song and the lyrics have got me. and beside it’s a very personal story i could relate to it. I like the chorus melody - nice work.

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Don't know why

Hi Ani, feels like a honest song about ‘first love’. I would suggest to avoid this big gap between verse and chorus It’s a better flow if you go directly into the chorus.

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on There'll Be Time

That’s life in a nutshell. Nice idea! I guess the lyric would work best if it stood up for itself. I like the second half of the closing verse, it’s a good statement, maybe you can find a better line for the first half. The melody is a... Read More