Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Uno Uno Dos

Yeah unique style, sounds a bit like a 60th party song. I’m not sure if it could work in current market, probably depends on production.

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Broken Glass

Hi Marvin, thank you for sharing this song. I guess a lot of people know someone with Alzheimer disease or dementia and can relate to what you are telling us. I wonder if it is too sad? It has a bitter taste.

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Thats What Forever Means

Hi Richard, all in all the story works well for me. I like the second verse (not the alternate verse) more than the first one because it is more descriptive. It’s easier to relate to the song if you show things. You could dig a bit deeper into emotions,... Read More

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Miracle Pill

Hi Marvin, thanks for sharing this one, it’s one of my favorites of your endless stream of great songs. I like the meaningful message and the way the lyric is constructed. The demo could have a bit more power. I try to imagine how it would sound, if Brad... Read More

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on When Will it Stop?

Hi Haydee - a nice tune, very emotional. I like ‘Candy with poison within’  - a great line. I wonder if ‘Poisoned Candy’  would be a more interesting title for the song. You didn’t use any rhyming in the chorus what at first hearing sounded a bit... Read More