Frank Renfordt gave feedback on BABY, COME HOME

Hi Jack, the song has a good flow, but in this case in my opinion that is not enough. I miss a bridge or a solo part that wakes us up a little bit. The same applies to the lyrics. This topic has been sung about so often and I... Read More

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on HOT WOMEN, WHISKY AND BEER

Hi Jack, what a cool production - sounds really great! The hook is very much cliche, but the way you tell your story is quiet original. Good work!

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on HE MADE ME LAUGH

Hi Jack, it’s hard to say anything about this song, it seems like a very personal song and it goes to heart. Probably that kind of song you need to get off your chest.

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on MY FLORIDA HOME

Hi Jack, I’ve never been to Florida (beside of a 10 hours stay at Miami Airport), but after hearing your song I feel like to go there - very nice imagery! Must be a very nice place for living there. The structure of the song is a a bit unusual... Read More

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on DID YOU EVER HAVE A SON

Hi Jack, I like the lyrics, it sounds true and right from the heart. However I don’t think that this song has big commercial potential in todays market, it’s a bit dated what doesn’t wonder, as you wrote it a long time ago. Nevertheless good work!