Dick Plunk gave feedback on Different

Dave, I really like this song and the idea it expresses. But I had a problem with the “we’re coexisting” line. To me, that implies that we are tolerating each other. But I think you were expressing the idea of difference giving life color, flavor, and interest. Thus, in... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on Dip

Very clever with a cool melody and arrangement. I’ll probably be humming this for days. I also think you created some pretty neat rhymes (tubes/food, prunes/moon, quick/drip) The only line that seemed a little incongruous to me was ““how about a race” (in the chorus). ... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on Don't Give Up On Me

This is a really beautiful song. And I like the sign/road analogy for this guy trying to overcome problems that this couple have had. I particularly liked “I’ll ignore the no trespass signs at the entrance to your weary heart”. (Although based on the feeling of the song,... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on Light It Up

Ryan, Cool song. It has a lot of “ear candy” - neat melody, those cool echos (up, up), the list like bridge,  - all cool stuff making the song fun to listen to. I guess my only critique point would be to NOT repeat the last four lines of... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on Carry On

Jamie, Great song. I loved it when you performed it at Cemetos. The dynamics are great. When you hit the chorus, it is really effective. I also think the percussive guitar really works for this song.