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Dip

Dave Undis

March 06, 2015

Genre: Country

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Let's get naked and go for a dip.

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Dick Plunk

Very clever with a cool melody and arrangement. I’ll probably be humming this for days. I also think you created some pretty neat rhymes (tubes/food, prunes/moon, quick/drip)

The only line that seemed a little incongruous to me was ““how about a race” (in the chorus).  I presume you mean “a race getting undressed”, but it made me have to stop and think and I missed the next line. Minor point.

Good song.

April 04, 2015

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Dip
by Dave Undis and Michael Skotte

VERSE
The moonlight looks good on you.
I bet the river would too.
Let’s go for a swim alone.
I know a place off the old dirt road.
Why don’t the two of us hop in my car?
It’s a really nice night and it’s not too far.

CHORUS
We don’t need our swim suits. We can just strip.
How about a race? I’ll help you unzip.
The weather don’t ever get better than this.
Let’s get naked. Let’s go for a dip.

VERSE
I’ve got a couple of inner tubes
And a picnic basket full of food.
I’ve got some moonshine in my flask
And a blanket to spread on the grass.
We can swim ‘till we’re as wrinkled as prunes.
No one will see us but the man in the moon.

CHORUS
We don’t need our swim suits. We can just strip.
How about a race? I’ll help you unzip.
The weather don’t ever get better than this.
Let’s get naked. Let’s go for a dip.

BRIDGE
We can wade in slow, or we can jump in quick.
We can bring some towels, or we can just drip.

CHORUS
We don’t need our swim suits. We can just strip.
How about a race? I’ll help you unzip.
The weather don’t ever get better than this.
We don’t need our swim suits. We can just strip.
How about a race? I’ll help you unzip.
The weather don’t ever get better than this.
Let’s get naked. Let’s go for a dip.

Let’s get naked. Let’s go for a dip.

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Dick Plunk

Very clever with a cool melody and arrangement. I’ll probably be humming this for days. I also think you created some pretty neat rhymes (tubes/food, prunes/moon, quick/drip)

The only line that seemed a little incongruous to me was ““how about a race” (in the chorus).  I presume you mean “a race getting undressed”, but it made me have to stop and think and I missed the next line. Minor point.

Good song.

April 04, 2015


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