Joined: January 29, 2018
James Likes: 3 Songs
James Kelso gave feedback on Take My Time
I think I am seeing your point guys. It is the phrase itself that draws a certain emotion that can’t be disconnected emotionally from what it really means. When I wrote it I was trying to capture the idea that I am going hard after quality time with her,... Read More
James Kelso gave feedback on On Earth In Us
Thank you Donna, I really appreciate the comments. I see what you mean with the title. The title I chose is more relevant to the song meaning I think, but that title is a bit more of the hook isn’t it?
James Kelso gave feedback on When All Else Fails
Great tune and production. Thanks for sharing it. Not sure what level of feedback you are looking for but here are some thoughts… First thought was that this feels like a song that should be pitched to a female vocalist because it is about helping a friend get over... Read More
James Kelso gave feedback on Take My Time
That’s great feedback Rick. I see what you are saying about the pre-chorus and I have never thought about it that way before. Kind of kills the vibe of the song a little. Gotta confess the dual meaning for the candle with the wine was one of the lines... Read More
James Kelso gave feedback on Better Than The Worse
Thanks Corey, I agree. After writing this and recording it I felt the same way. Not a lot of dynamic. I like the idea but it could have come together a lot less sappy and more dynamic.