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February 03, 2018

James Kelso gave feedback on Better Than The Worse

Thanks Corey, I agree. After writing this and recording it I felt the same way. Not a lot of dynamic. I like the idea but it could have come together a lot less sappy and more dynamic.

February 03, 2018

James Kelso gave feedback on Take My Time

I think I am seeing your point guys. It is the phrase itself that draws a certain emotion that can’t be disconnected emotionally from what it really means. When I wrote it I was trying to capture the idea that I am going hard after quality time with her,... Read More

February 03, 2018

James Kelso gave feedback on On Earth In Us

Thank you Donna, I really appreciate the comments. I see what you mean with the title. The title I chose is more relevant to the song meaning I think, but that title is a bit more of the hook isn’t it?

February 03, 2018

James Kelso gave feedback on When All Else Fails

Great tune and production. Thanks for sharing it.  Not sure what level of feedback you are looking for but here are some thoughts… First thought was that this feels like a song that should be pitched to a female vocalist because it is about helping a friend get over... Read More

February 01, 2018

James Kelso gave feedback on Take My Time

That’s great feedback Rick. I see what you are saying about the pre-chorus and I have never thought about it that way before. Kind of kills the vibe of the song a little. Gotta confess the dual meaning for the candle with the wine was one of the lines... Read More

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