Joined: January 20, 2018
Kyle Likes: 5 Songs
Kyle Mercer gave feedback on Hard to Hurt
‘It’s hard to hurt a heart that’s broke’ is a damn good line, Kay’s right.
Kyle Mercer gave feedback on You're Like A Tumor
Just so you know—the play function isn’t working on this song at the moment. (9:46 Central 2/15)
Kyle Mercer gave feedback on Girl with the Guitar case
Hard to imagine English isn’t your native tongue. It’s a sweet song. I like it. I’d be hard-pressed to find any critical suggestions for the verse and chorus that wouldn’t be nit-picky things. But if you ever want to tinker with the piece again, like Sonya,... Read More
Kyle Mercer gave feedback on Redneck Girl
When you talk about the break in the middle of the ‘chorus’, I assume you’re referring to that long 3 bar instrumental passage after the ‘She’s a redneck girl’ line. I remember when I was first trying to stitch the piece together, church-licking chords on a guitar behind the... Read More
Kyle Mercer gave feedback on Hard to Hurt
One little thing I noticed when I first heard the song: When the piece starts out, your narrator speaks about the girl and the guys hitting on her in third person. But on the second line of the second stanza, he switches to second person—which, in English, can be... Read More