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Kyle Mercer

February 21, 2018

Kyle Mercer gave feedback on Let Me Take You to the Mardi Gras

Yeah, I broke out of the lyrical pattern in that second verse a bit, didn’t I? I like to pretend to myself it provides a little melodic variation, like in all those old Piedmont rags and Appalachian fiddle tunes I used to listen to. (“So why don’t you... Read More

February 21, 2018

Kyle Mercer gave feedback on A Barfly's Benediction

Thank you. My stuff doesn’t draw much commentary, pro or con, and because I’m not a performer with access to live audience feedback, I really appreciate it when someone takes the time to say something.

February 18, 2018

Kyle Mercer gave feedback on Syria, West Virginia

My kind of song—very, very, very nice. Like Lisa, I love the sparse production. ‘Before the rubble, before the dust/Before God in Heaven stopped hearing us’ is a great couplet and a great line to close the chorus with. And I loved your title. And I really loved... Read More

February 18, 2018

Kyle Mercer gave feedback on Rise Again (Country Pop Mix)

I’m inclined to agree with James. (I tried to ‘Like’ his comment, but the website wouldn’t accept it for some reason.) I’m not a big fan of ‘message’ songs, but I do think you have a nice chorus and a lovely voice. Good luck with it.

February 18, 2018

Kyle Mercer gave feedback on The Dance

Okay, so the second line of the song wasn’t the only one that left me a little confused, there were a couple of others, but I really, really like the melody and the feel of the piece, my foot starts to tap when I listen to it and I... Read More

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