Brandon Barclay gave feedback on I Thought Wrong

Your lyrics say runner, dressed, but you sing Jogger. It’s catchy. the line I thought wrong, resonated well. For some reason, that look was mighty scary, I didn’t think she was a pretty women. When you you saw her from a far, for some reason, I was thinking... Read More

Brandon Barclay gave feedback on Ladylike

The songs cool. I wrote more feedback, but cut it because, hell, this already long. My thoughts. The biscuit line is not strong enough. She is painted as sexy, then that line. Maybe it’s supposed to bring her back down to earth. Though after that line it was hard... Read More

Brandon Barclay gave feedback on Dont Make Me Lie to You

I’m trying to gather meaning from this. It sounds great. Just the story. Is he a guy that accuses her of cheating. Like who is that man? But he already knows that she knows him? Is there nothing there and you don’t want to make something up to... Read More

Brandon Barclay gave feedback on Fall on Me

I will help you believe instead of can help you believe, because can is coming across as can’t, not sure but I think you were saying can help you.  How about make it through in strides, instead of make it through tonight. What if it’s during the... Read More

Brandon Barclay gave feedback on Tonight I'm Drinking Alone

is there no way to edit a comment. Anyways, I ment 10 apples to the oranges you are eating at home.