Joined: January 10, 2018
Kevin Likes: 25 Songs
Kevin Fox gave feedback on Take this pain away
I Like it Good Job Fellow Song writer ..Good Message ...Seems like everything is there structure wise…..ROCK ON LIFES A SONG ENJOY THE MELODY
Kevin Fox gave feedback on Two tears in a bucket
Hi Andrea I like this melody I got a couple thing’s If I could suggest to you. 1st verse I think may flow better if you just say should I hide my head in sand. You also may want to consider putting a 2nd verse in before you go... Read More
Kevin Fox gave feedback on Don’t Be Surprised
maybe take a look at the syllable count per line for each verse. Try to not be more then 1 or 2 syllables off per line compared to 1st vs 2nd verse…That’s what I have been getting critiqued on in a lot of my song’s. But at end of... Read More
Kevin Fox gave feedback on Texas or Tennessee
will u please post the lyrics when you get time ..THX I like it so far
Kevin Fox gave feedback on God’s Little Half Acre
Awesome Job Great message. I enjoyed ..Great structure and Story ..A+ LIFES A SONG ENJOY THE MELODY