Sonya Dauth gave feedback on Set Up For A Fall

Hi Jason I liked the first verse - that worked pretty well. Other than that, it doesn’t sing to me. Question - what kind of fall? Is this girl just out for a good night and is he expecting to get hurt? I kinda zoned out during the chorus... Read More

Sonya Dauth gave feedback on Girl with the Guitar case

Hi Frank I really like the storyline and it has a really catchy rhythm and vibe. I was kind of looking for a wrap up in the “bridge”(?) and found the new thought of her being lonely and maybe ending up with a bitter sweet song to sing didn’t... Read More

Sonya Dauth gave feedback on Fly On The Wall

Hey Jayne Thanks so much for your feedback again. It is always very much appreciated. The concept that you thought you saw was correct.  We look at others relationships and think ours is nothing like that - what we don’t know is what goes on behind closed doors.... Read More

Sonya Dauth gave feedback on Broken Hearted

Hey Nick I like the energy in the music. I’m still learning about lyric writing too so I will leave those hints to the experts. Cheers Sonya

Sonya Dauth gave feedback on Fly On The Wall

Hey Brent Thank you again for your feedback.  As always, very helpful and encouraging. I will have another go at the beginning. Cheers Sonya