Brent Baxter gave feedback on Ocean

Man, Alec… thanks for sharing that.  I’ve also written about someone special that I’ve lost (a different kind of tragedy than you lost your person to).  It was a HARD write, and I cried a lot. Were the “you” and “her” shifts intentional?  As if... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on (I Wanna) Go Somewhere

Hey, Katie! Thanks for sharing your song!  I like that you’re writing tempo and from the heart.  I think you have an opportunity to make the song more memorable by adding in imagery.  Show me where you are now.  Show me some places you might... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Fish in the sea

Hey, Rebekah!  Thanks for sharing your song with us!  I like the thought of “you’re my only fish in the sea.”  I like that you don’t overdo the “fish” imagery/lines.  That could’ve made it more of a novelty song than you wanted. ... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Sober Love

Hey, Joey!  Thanks for sharing.  Cool title.  I dig how you use “sober love” multiple ways.  Allows you to repeat the title while also keeping it fresh.  I like that it moves with some groove and tempo.  Also, “we flew like a boulder” is... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Wildfire

Hey, Katie!  Thanks for sharing your song with us!  The lyric formatting looks fine to me.  I like that you’ve written this as an uptempo song.  Tempo is generally much more commercial.  I like the “woah woah” parts. I think what’s missing for... Read More