Brent Baxter gave feedback on Hearts Wide Open

Hey, Michael!  Thanks for sharing your song.  Congrats on its success so far. I like some of the poetry in the lyric.  Sirens that crawl into our beds and wake us.  Sin that we love and love we ignore.  Dogs of addiction that tug and... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on LA PLAYA WALK (A HIP-HOP/RAP TUNE)

Hey, Bob!  Thanks for sharing.  Now, I’m not a guy to be giving advice on a rap song, so take all this with a grain of salt. My biggest question is in the chorus.  Just reading the title, I thought “Playa” was like “player,” and “player... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on 'AS FOR ME AND MY HOUSE'

Hey, Robert! Thanks for sharing.  Yes, I’m sure that title has been written a bunch.  But there’s nothing legally keeping all of us from writing it, too. I like that you went positive tempo with it.  I wonder if you would be well-served to do... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Hypnotized

Hey, Amber!  First of all, it’s awesome that you’re putting in the work of rewriting.  That’s gonna really help your craft.  So good on you! I don’t have the previous version in front of me, but based on just what I see here,... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Make it Last

Hey, Barry!  Thanks for sharing!  Just a couple quick observations.  I like some of the images like the hair brushing and pulling on shoes. I notice that you switched the POV between “she” and “you” in the song.  I’d try to keep those consistent. ... Read More