Brent Baxter gave feedback on Fire in The Ice

Hi, Jolene!  Thanks for sharing your lyric with us!  Now, I’m not a pop guy, but I have a few thoughts.  First of all, I like the title.  It’s cool, and it makes me curious what the song does with it. In Verse 2, you... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Lettin’ Go

Hi, Marvin- thanks for sharing this song with us.  Sad song, but it feels good, if you know what I mean.  Good melodic work.  Solid song.  I hope writing it has helped you let go of somethings you were never meant to carry.

Brent Baxter gave feedback on No Trespassing

Hi, Marie!  Thanks for sharing your song with us.  (Wish I had the lyrics so I could dive in more deeply.) It has a nice retro-country vibe to it.  Lyrically and melodically, it feels like I’ve tuned into a classic country station.  I like that... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on No Maybe’s Baby

Hey, Tony!  Thanks for sharing your song.  I like that you’re writing positive/love/me-you/midtempos.  That’s commercially smart. However, I’d watch the cliche rhymes like “you/true” in the 1st line.  You really want to grab the listener with something fresh- especially... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Take What You Need

Hi, Evan!  Welcome to Frettie!  Thanks for sharing your music with us.  I like how you start off with a clear, intriguing image about the kitchen light. However, with her going to bed alone each night and making the coffee every morning… she’s pretty sympathetic- moreso... Read More