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Hi Marie,
I enjoyed listening to your song. I’m a newby, at least to Frettie, and after reading your avatar, I have a much better idea how I should’ve structured mine - yours is quite impressive!
Anyway, regarding the song, I liked it very much! And, your pitch is spot-on, which is no surprise with your background as a session vocalist. And, your harmonies were tight, as well. If I was to offer anything whatsoever, it would be in the area of dynamics. It’s a sad song, but it didn’t sound sad, or glad for that matter. I hope I’m not stepping on any toes… because it’s a beautiful song and that’s the only suggestion I could consider that might enhance the feeling of the song.
Thanks for sharing!
May 21, 2018
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Hello Marie
I liked listening to your song and in particular to your singing it. You have a lovely voice. I like the genre you write in. I live nearby in CT, and wonder if we might try some collaborating. My genre are bluegrass, southern gospel and traditional country. I do write with some other co-writers and we do it all via email. But you and I live close enough that we could get together. I am often looking for help with melodies. If you want to explore further reach me at .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address) or by phone 860-455-9400.
October 31, 2018
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Hi, Marie! Thanks for sharing your song with us. (Wish I had the lyrics so I could dive in more deeply.)
It has a nice retro-country vibe to it. Lyrically and melodically, it feels like I’ve tuned into a classic country station. I like that it has some mid-tempo to it and that the singer is empowered, not just a sad victim.
I like the key, windows and blinds references- they’re on point for the theme of the song.
Hope that helps! Please take a moment to leave a comment on another writer’s song. It doesn’t have to be super-detailed or anything. Just a thought or two about the song. (Also, the best way to GET feedback is to GIVE feedback.) Thanks!
May 14, 2018
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Hi Marie,
I enjoyed listening to your song. I’m a newby, at least to Frettie, and after reading your avatar, I have a much better idea how I should’ve structured mine - yours is quite impressive!
Anyway, regarding the song, I liked it very much! And, your pitch is spot-on, which is no surprise with your background as a session vocalist. And, your harmonies were tight, as well. If I was to offer anything whatsoever, it would be in the area of dynamics. It’s a sad song, but it didn’t sound sad, or glad for that matter. I hope I’m not stepping on any toes… because it’s a beautiful song and that’s the only suggestion I could consider that might enhance the feeling of the song.
Thanks for sharing!
May 21, 2018
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Hello Marie
I liked listening to your song and in particular to your singing it. You have a lovely voice. I like the genre you write in. I live nearby in CT, and wonder if we might try some collaborating. My genre are bluegrass, southern gospel and traditional country. I do write with some other co-writers and we do it all via email. But you and I live close enough that we could get together. I am often looking for help with melodies. If you want to explore further reach me at .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address) or by phone 860-455-9400.
October 31, 2018
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Hi, Marie! Thanks for sharing your song with us. (Wish I had the lyrics so I could dive in more deeply.)
It has a nice retro-country vibe to it. Lyrically and melodically, it feels like I’ve tuned into a classic country station. I like that it has some mid-tempo to it and that the singer is empowered, not just a sad victim.
I like the key, windows and blinds references- they’re on point for the theme of the song.
Hope that helps! Please take a moment to leave a comment on another writer’s song. It doesn’t have to be super-detailed or anything. Just a thought or two about the song. (Also, the best way to GET feedback is to GIVE feedback.) Thanks!
May 14, 2018
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