Brent Baxter gave feedback on Shuffle and Deal

Hi, Roger!  Thanks for sharing your song with us.  The chorus kicks in nicely and has a fun groove.  Horns?  I like it.  Cool title, too.  I like that it’s a positive spin. However, the verses are little hard to follow.  So... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Heavenly Father

Hi, Ani!  Thanks for sharing your song with us.  I tell ya, the line “re-maker of my heart” stood out to me the most (in a good way).  I’d be interested in seeing how you’d build a song around that concept- how Jesus will “cleanse”... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Man Ya Just Do

Hi, Charles!  Thanks for sharing your song with us.  I like that it’s a positive, me/you love song.  And I like the title/idea.  I’d like to have more specific imagery, a la the Shiner Bock kiss.  Lines like that make it... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Cried Like Rain

Hi, Jack- welcome to Frettie!  Thanks for sharing your song and your story with us.  I like that, even though it’s an emotional song, you didn’t make it a slow ballad.  I’m glad it has come energy. The line “your eyes and his are... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Here (Is Where The Heart Is)

Hi, David- welcome to Frettie!  Thanks for sharing your song with us.  I like that it’s a positive, love song singing directly to your lover.  I like the title and main idea.  Some nice imagery in there, too.  “Bright diamondly” is an unusual way... Read More