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Hi, Charles! Thanks for sharing your song with us. I like that it’s a positive, me/you love song. And I like the title/idea. I’d like to have more specific imagery, a la the Shiner Bock kiss. Lines like that make it feel more real.
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June 26, 2018
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I agree with Brent and Frank, loved the Shiner Bock line right up to the moonlight twist and was hoping it was going to continue with that kind of imagery! The title was why I picked to listen to your song. real nice song, great job!
June 27, 2018
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Frank, Brent and Stephen,
thanks for listening and for your feedback.
much appreciated!
Chuck
July 02, 2018
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I’m amazed by the way you’ve taken hold over me
I’ve always lived my life so easy and free
There’s been a lot of ladies, nothing seemed to last
Since I met you, girl that’s all in the past
How do you know when you found a love that’s true?
MAN YA JUST DO (man ya just do), MAN YOU JUST DO (man ya just do), MAN YA JUST DO
You grabbed me by the heart, took me by surprise
With your pretty brown eyes and your angel smile
I got a little drunk on your Shiner Bock kiss
Bodies close, dancing slow in our moonlight tryst
How do you know when you found a love that’s true?
MAN YA JUST DO (man ya just do), MAN YOU JUST DO (man ya just do), MAN YA JUST DO
I’ve been in love before but I never felt so high
Hold on to me girl, hold on to me girl
I never wanna be without you by my side
Hold on to me girl, hold on to me girl
How do you know when you found a love that’s true?
(tacet)
How do you know when you found a love that’s true?
MAN YA JUST DO (man ya just do), MAN YOU JUST DO (man ya just do), MAN YA JUST DO (repeat)
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Hi Charles - I like the line ‘got a little drunk on your Shiner Bock kiss’ - didn’t know what that meant, but I found out it’s a beer -LOL. Would have liked to hear more of such lines, most other are a bit cliche, but don’t worry too much, most songs are full of cliches.
June 24, 2018
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Hi, Charles! Thanks for sharing your song with us. I like that it’s a positive, me/you love song. And I like the title/idea. I’d like to have more specific imagery, a la the Shiner Bock kiss. Lines like that make it feel more real.
Hope that helps! Please pay it forward by leaving a comment on another writer’s song. Thanks!
June 26, 2018
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Frank, Brent and Stephen,
thanks for listening and for your feedback.
much appreciated!
Chuck
July 02, 2018
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Hi Charles - I like the line ‘got a little drunk on your Shiner Bock kiss’ - didn’t know what that meant, but I found out it’s a beer -LOL. Would have liked to hear more of such lines, most other are a bit cliche, but don’t worry too much, most songs are full of cliches.
June 24, 2018
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