Brent Baxter gave feedback on Real Country Music

Hey, Tony… tell us how you REALLY feel, why don’t ya!  I’m staying out of the “real-country-vs-not-real-county” argument, but this does have some clever lines about “pretty” and “boys,” etc.  And it has an appropriate feel for your target audience. Hope that helps!  Please take... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Bury Me Here

Nice sounding song, Alexsi.  And cool idea- I like how “Bury Me Here” turns out so positive. However, the 1st verse doesn’t kill me (no pun intended).  It didn’t set me up emotionally for that chorus. I wonder if this might work well as a love... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Aspen

Hi, Walter.  Thanks for sharing your song with us.  First off, I like the title.  It doesn’t give anything away, which I like. I think you could edit down the verses quite a bit.  I actually think that chorus might be a good 1st verse,... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Sneakin' out of Beaumont

I dig the title- it made me want to listen.  I really like the 1st two lines.  I like how you put “fog” in line 1 to SHOW us the rumors, and I really like how whispers get so loud they turn into talk.  Very cool. Hope that... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on She loves me when I do the chores

Monte, thanks for sharing your song with us!  I know about the “5 Love Languages.”  Pretty cool, fun idea.  I like the vibe. Love that you use realistic specifics.  And I like that you set up the “she doesn’t love my body, BUT…” to set up... Read More