Bim Walker gave feedback on Self-Inflicted Blues

Thanks David, I appreciate that!

Bim Walker gave feedback on shaking hands

I really like the chorus, I think it has a lot of potential. Maybe playing with the point of view might help you with some ideas going forward. For example, the first verse feels mostly 1st-person, but the chorus is more 2nd-person. So there is a question of whether it... Read More

Bim Walker gave feedback on Somewhere To Go

Yeah, I agree with your assessment.  I like the idea of this enough to want to work with it.  I think part of the problem is that it’s not very interesting melodically, so I might try to change how the vocal lines work in the verses. ... Read More

Bim Walker gave feedback on Don't Give Up On Me Baby

Thanks Dan, that’s really good feedback. I had the music first, which seemed to “speak” that first line of verse to me, so I had deliberately paired them.  I never considered unpairing the vocals from the music, but I will definitely give that a try!

Bim Walker gave feedback on Self-Inflicted Blues

Thanks a lot!