Russ DeWolfe gave feedback on Take the Broken Heart

Song is good. Nice subject. I don’t really see the singer as taking the broken heart. That implies to me that she is not going to be broken hearted.

Russ DeWolfe gave feedback on How Can She Be Jennifer?

It feels awkward. As if the person you are actually speaking to is not real. You don’t address that person at all.

Russ DeWolfe gave feedback on As Much As I Do

Good subject and well done. The bridge threw me completely, I think it needs work. The final verse last words could be a little different as a final wish for happiness stated in a different way.

Russ DeWolfe gave feedback on Breathe Again

Feel a little too personal, maybe, like it doesn’t feel universal enough to relate to

Russ DeWolfe gave feedback on Breathe Again

I like most of the chorus, but feel the verses could use a bit more work. They