Joined: January 25, 2026
Rick Likes: 15 Songs
Rick Carroll gave feedback on Run Amanda Run
I dig the vibe! Story as well. You’ll probably notice the pause from Chorus to verse and Bridge. It wouldn’t hurt anything to add a 6th line “Run Amanda Run” to end the chorus. This gives the vocalist a great opportunity to add any embellishment or melody change... Read More
Rick Carroll gave feedback on As Much As I Do
line 6 in verse 1, I’m asking what day are you taken back to. I understand where you were going with it, but was it a particular day? Same with the bridge. Robert pointed to a nice twist for final chorus. Maybe more condolence to me than to her, leading to... Read More
Rick Carroll gave feedback on Can I Borrow A Whiskey?
Another goodie here. Only thing i have here is line 2 in the chorus. When I sing it back, I had to get my phrasing just right to make it work. You want the chorus to be singable. To use a word I’ve received before lol. “It’s a clunker... Read More
Rick Carroll gave feedback on Hides A Tornado
Haha… This makes so much more since now! Great concept.