Joseph Lines gave feedback on Stained Glass

Beautiful message! also, love the melody line. really strong chorus! Well done!

Joseph Lines gave feedback on Started With Hello

Good song! Great take! I think the chorus resolution would be punchier if it was written “You healed my heart from the start, and it started with hello.” Just a thought but it resolves the rhyme more rhythmically.

Joseph Lines gave feedback on If We Saw the World Just Like You

Beautiful first verse and chorus. Really great start! Just a thought, in the second verse, creating a juxtaposition using the imagery of a sunny day with the same result. I think it would reinforce the message I think you’re trying to convey, which is seeing people, the world, and... Read More

Joseph Lines gave feedback on Stay Here Slow

Really good wordplay! Really tight first verse! Absolutely love that line “Get there quick, and stay here slow” Great line!