Country song about finding love through a simple “Hello”.
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Good song! Great take! I think the chorus resolution would be punchier if it was written “You healed my heart from the start, and it started with hello.” Just a thought but it resolves the rhyme more rhythmically.
November 09, 2025
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Started With Hello
[verse one]
The moonlight glistens in your eyes.
Sun kissed skin on your thighs.
Oh man- that first- kiss surprise!
Better than I imagined.
Been dreamin this could happened.
All about you, I got to know.
We both vowed we’d take it slow.
Now our first date and I finally see-
You’re the one that’s meant for me.
[hook]
It started with “Hello”.
How would we ever know.
(How could we know?)
We talked for hours and took our time.
Learning our pasts, line for line.
You healed my heart from the very start.
Hard to see, it started with “Hello”.
[verse two]
Today’s the perfect time,
Your hand held in mine.
Our crazy past, now intertwined.
We laugh in rhythm and dance in time.
Random kisses just because.
A perfect union from above.
Everyday we grow together-
We have each other now, forever.
[hook]
It started with “Hello”.
How would we ever know.
(How could we know?)
Still remember your smile,
and angelic glow that day.
You’re perfect In every way.
Now, forever my wife-
What a beautiful life!
Hard to see, it started with “Hello”.
(Started with “Hello”,)
[post hook]
Now you’re my friend and my wife.
I love you so much!
(I love you honey!)
And thank God for you each night.
Hard to believe, it started with “Hello”.
(It started with “Hello”.)
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Good song! Great take! I think the chorus resolution would be punchier if it was written “You healed my heart from the start, and it started with hello.” Just a thought but it resolves the rhyme more rhythmically.
November 09, 2025
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Brandon Cannaday
This is part one of a two part story but can stand alone.
November 09, 2025
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