Joined: April 4, 2023
Adam Likes: 6 Songs
Adam deWeber gave feedback on Our Bed Is Still Unmade
You did well, the lyric seems good and the melody and feel are really nice in my opinion. Since you said “good bad and ugly,” I’ll nitpick! “Faded curtains hanging in this room” makes it feel like they aren’t in their own room, or at least it isn... Read More
Adam deWeber gave feedback on Your Worship is a Weapon Demo
I love the line “what do you do when the lion roars, open up your mouth and make a joyful noise.” This has a great southern gospel vibe. Nice work!
Adam deWeber gave feedback on Girl It Ain’t Me
Fun up-tempo song! Cool idea with a dude basically self-deprecating and then simultaneously suggesting she’ll probably like him better that way. I’m new here, so I hope this is the kind of feedback you would want. Please disregard if not! I didn’t really know what was going... Read More
Adam deWeber gave feedback on Thank Country
No cellphone bars, a million stars…great way to say “out in the country” without saying that!