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It’s Alright

Patrick Jaouen

January 28, 2015

Genre: Country

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A song about people.

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Christian Gross

I like the vibe of this song. I think it could use a bridge though with different harmonies, just to freshen it up a bit.

March 19, 2015


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The days are long
The water deep
But this old town
Is where he sleeps
No bed to lie in
No fancy clothes
This town he'll die in
Cause it's all he knows

And it's alright x4

Sara's at the bar
Takes up a glass
Tired of boys
No men with class
She takes a swig
Whiskey and ice
Postcard of a beach on the bar
She's thinks wouldn't that be nice.

And it's alright x4

Down at the corner store
Jimmy buys his rum
Mom died when he was 5 years old
In a hit and run
Now Jimmy's 34
And he don't talk that much
But The girls think he's good looking
And he can sure throw a punch

And it's alright x4

Twenty year have past
Twenty years have gone
Out on this winding road
It’s all I’ve known
But these days are calm
And life's been good
I can't ask for more than what I got
Well I guess I could

But it's alright x4

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Christian Gross

I like the vibe of this song. I think it could use a bridge though with different harmonies, just to freshen it up a bit.

March 19, 2015


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