That delicious morning waking with someone special
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The softness of your skin
The cool morning whispers
And the touch in your voice
As slowly we waken, in the grey of the morning
In the dawn
My hands do the talking
As a bird starts its singing
And fingers do the walking
So gently stroking, feeling together
In the dawn
Your eyes they are saying
What my heart it is feeling
And your lips are so soft
As together embracing, making love in the morning
In the dawn.
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Dennis Field
I really enjoyed this! Nice job.
November 12, 2014
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