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I like the melody here, although some of the lyrics could be a bit clearer. You have an interesting song structure with the uneven and even number of lines.
April 09, 2015
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So you want to be a fighter.
You wanna run free.
Well, baby come hither.
Come run with me.
Getting sick while you're waiting.
The clock clicks on,
but the darkness is fading.
Go chase the Dawn.
You gotta...
Run Fast, just as fast as you can.
Go out and explore the land.
Push past all the fear and hate.
You gotta, unlatch every last restraint.
Unlatch every last restraint.
So you wanna be a fighter.
You wanna climb high.
Well, Baby come with me.
We'll touch the sky.
Gettin sick while you're running.
Your heart beats fast,
But the miles are fading.
Go break the glass.
Run fast, just as fast as you can.
Go out and explore the land.
Push past all the fear and hate.
You gotta, unlatch every last restraint.
Unlatch every last restraint.
Push through you gotta push, push through.
Run baby, run baby run.
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I like the melody here, although some of the lyrics could be a bit clearer. You have an interesting song structure with the uneven and even number of lines.
April 09, 2015
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Nigel Parry
Nice catchy chorus.
Nice ending to the song too.
November 06, 2014