A timely critique of war and it horror effects on all involved. I am not critical of the troops. My Dad and Father in law both served, my brother in law is an officer in the US Navy Reserves.
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I woke up to the news today
It was bound to happen this way.
Yelling in the streets, the bombs they fall
we repeat our past a cold resolve.
Peace is just another word they choose
to silence all who'd criticize abuse.
right and wrong the nation makes a stand
March ahead in absence of a plan
(Chorus)
To be silent is folly
to speak of it I'm calling,
won't you pick up my daydream
sleeping, never waking...
and I guess that's why, we were born to die.
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