When I'm Gone is a stream of consciousness. I'm letting the boyfriend realize, you're going to lose me and it's your fault.
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It's been like this a while
Tryin to figure out every little thing.
I know they say it's all written in the stars
But it all seems lost on me.
No going back, they say
After a heartbreak
Cuz the taste, don't taste the same.
So when you realize that you need me,
You're gonna turn around and I'll be gone.
It's not easy to, walk away from you,
But let me show you how it's done.
Cuz you say you're gonna change,
That every day's a new day
But my hope goes down like the sun
So whatcha gonna do when I'm gone?
So close your eyes and count to ten.
And I'll be gone before you can...
No going back, they say
After a heartbreak
Cuz the taste, don't taste the same.
So when you realize that you need me,
You're gonna turn around and I'll be gone.
It's not easy to, walk away from you,
But let me show you how it's done.
Cuz you say you're gonna change,
That every day's a new day
But my hope goes down like the sun
So whatcha gonna do when I'm gone?
Copyright 2013 Emma Lane/Mike Goncalvez BMI
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THIS IS A GREAT TRACK WITH A REALLY GOOD HOOK IN THE CHORUS , THE SONG HAS AN UPLIFTING FEEL IN THE CHORUS AS IF IT SAY I WILL BE GONE AND BE BETTER FOR IT , THATS JUST HOW I INTERPERATE IT , I WOULD BE HAPPY TO HEAR THIS SONG OVER AND OVER I REALLY LIKE IT
July 27, 2014
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Nathan Wall
THIS IS A GREAT TRACK WITH A REALLY GOOD HOOK IN THE CHORUS , THE SONG HAS AN UPLIFTING FEEL IN THE CHORUS AS IF IT SAY I WILL BE GONE AND BE BETTER FOR IT , THATS JUST HOW I INTERPERATE IT , I WOULD BE HAPPY TO HEAR THIS SONG OVER AND OVER I REALLY LIKE IT
July 27, 2014
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