This is a song about taking time to look at your life and find satisfaction. (please excuse the production as I'm not the best singer or producer)
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Elusive Perfection
Don't blame me if you can't see
A reason in a clear blue sky
There's always going to be a question
That will keep you wondering why
Just because your heart is broken
And your spirit is fighting with itself
This old worlds gonna keep a turning
Whether your dying
Or just sitting on a shelf
When I needed a friend I found you
Now I'll always have a place to go
Don't look too long for that elusive perfection
You might find… you're just stealing from your soul
I watched the flowers bloom with spring
I heard the night winds calling out your name
Those whispered words came on down from the mountain
Like sun shining through the rain
In a selfless act you put your arms around me
and my spirit rose a million miles high
I wish you could feel the wind that blew upon me
and know the happiness inside
When I needed a friend I found you
Now I'll always have a place to go
Don't look too long for that elusive perfection
You might find… you're just stealing from your soul
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