A guy in La. sent me a tape of him singing the words and I put this together. This is just a work tape. I'm not a pro vocalist so please understand that. Thanks!
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So many people in this world don't find love
some look too hard while others not enough
So if you find that special someone in your life
Don't wait too long ,
Tell her how you feel long before daylight
Girl you are the reason for this song
It may be winter but it's nice and warm girl in my heart
It may sound funny but its true
Girl I can't take my mind of you
while I sit here writing the words to this song
I talked to you just the other day
Found out you felt the very same way
You May be scared but it's gonna be okay
Chorus
Don't worry girl I'm here stride for stride
Take my hand girl let's go ride
Turn the music up in the pick up truck
Sit here by my side
girl i love your eyes
Don't worry girl I'm here stride for stride
Take my hand girl let's go ride
Baby roll those windows down
Turn the music up
Change that station girl
yeah, that's troy bullock
let's ride
I haven't slept in a couple days
Thoughts of loving you keep coming in so many ways
Your the girl I keep seeing in my dreams
Your in my arms, I'm loving you, your loving me
I talked to you just the other day
Found out you felt the very same way
You May be scared but it's gonna be okay
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