Lyricist And Producer: Hamidreza Ghorbani
Hi dear friend! Thank You So Much for your attention and kindness! ????????????✨️
June 19, 2026
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This is beautiful. The repeated “My father was a painter, but…” refrain creates a powerful emotional thread throughout the song, and I found the progression from artist to soldier to laborer especially moving.
June 20, 2026
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Thank you for your attention. Yes. This is a true idea and story from my father. I made this song and poem with my heart and feelings. I am glad that it caught your attention. ????✨️????????????????????
June 20, 2026
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پدرم نقاش بود و رو بومش
یه دنیا شوقِ زیبایی
دلش لبریز از غم بود
و عاشق بود توو تنهاییش
پدرم نقاش بود اما
با دستای پر از پینه
هنوزم ترکشِ جنگو
توی آغوشش میبینه
یه روزی واسه ی خاکش
گذشت از عمر و از جونش
برگشت با ترکش و باروت
که جا خوش کرده توو خونش
پدرم نقاش بود اما
قلمموش دست کارگر شد
واسه نونِ شبِ خونه
شب و روزش با غم سر شد
ثروتی نداشت ولی واسه ما
تا جایی که میتونست جنگید
از خودش گذشت و سوخت اما
کسی تنهاییشو نشنید...
پدرم زندهست ولی خستهست
بشکنه دستای این دنیا
ببین چطوری پیرش کرد
میونِ غصهها تنها
پدرم نقاش بود اما
رنگِ موهاش سفید شد و سرد
شاهکارِ روی بومش شد
یه کوه از غصه و از درد
دستای پینهبستهتو میبوسم
تویی تنها پناهِ من
بمون نقاشِ این خونه
پدر، ای تکیهگاهِ من...
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Hi dear friend! Thank You So Much for your attention and kindness! ????????????✨️
June 19, 2026
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This is beautiful. The repeated “My father was a painter, but…” refrain creates a powerful emotional thread throughout the song, and I found the progression from artist to soldier to laborer especially moving.
June 20, 2026
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Thank you for your attention. Yes. This is a true idea and story from my father. I made this song and poem with my heart and feelings. I am glad that it caught your attention. ????✨️????????????????????
June 20, 2026
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Christopher Mason
It’s a beautiful and deeply moving piece of writing
June 19, 2026
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