This is a love song I wrote talking about longevity, time tested, love that will, and has, continued through good and bad times. This could be done in a country version or more pop style. This demo is kind of in the middle of that.
Let me know some lyrics that surprised you when you wrote them. There's a line in here for me. "When my last breath is gone, and the world carries on" It's simple, but I thought it was pretty deep for me.
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Verse 1:
We’ve walked through storms and golden days,
Watched the seasons change their ways.
Every wrinkle, every line,
Tells the story of you and I.
Pre-Chorus:
The fire we lit so long ago,
Still warms my heart, it still glows.
Chorus:
Like the clouds in the sky, my love for you rolls on,
And like the stars in the night, burning love for all time.
Through the years and beyond, when the daylight is gone,
Like the clouds in the sky, my love for you rolls on.
Verse 2:
We’ve built a life from simple dreams,
Through broken roads and quiet streams.
Every moment, small or grand,
Still feels like I’m holding your hand.
Pre-Chorus:
Even when the days grow long,
You’re the reason for my song.
Chorus:
Like the clouds in the sky, my love for you rolls on,
And like the stars in the night, burning love for all time.
Through the years and beyond, when the daylight is gone,
Like the clouds in the sky, my love for you rolls on.
Bridge:
And when the moonlight fades away,
I’ll still find you in the gray.
Time can try, but it can’t steal,
The kind of love that stays so real.
Final Chorus:
Like the clouds in the sky, my love for you rolls on,
And like the stars in the night, burning love for all time.
When my last breath is gone, and the world carries on,
Like the clouds in the sky — my love rolls on
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