When trust was broken between love and my heart, I found it impossible to let myself be unguarded. Then she came along and said, “Ok, I’ll hang around and be here for you because I think you’re worth it … even if you don’t”. Lucky me!
I wrote the song as a ballad but it just sounded heavy and too needy so I wrote another melody for uptempo. I hope you like it.
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Yeah, I'm Here
(Verse 1)
I got no star, no guidin’ light
I’m in the dark, same as you
Got no miracles to heal a broken heart
That kind of magic’s somethin’ I don’t do
(Pre-chorus)
No I’m not here to fix you at all
Yeah, I’ll try, but I can't swear I’ll break your fall
But if you want someone who’ll take you as you are
(Chorus)
I'm here, I’m here
When the days feel endless, when the truth hits hard
I can’t fix the cracks, but I won’t go far
I’m here
(Verse 2)
A thief called love stole my crown
Your pedestal’s on the ground
Got no golden touch to make a slipper fit
My carriage is a lifted, F 250 Ford
(Pre-chorus)
Slammin’ doors and broken promises
We both know how lonely sounds at 3 a.m
If you’re lookin’ for a man, who’ll show all his cards
(Chorus)
I'm here, I’m here
When the night hangs heavy, the road’s unclear
I can’t fix what’s broken, but i ain’t goin’ nowhere
Yeah, I’m here
(Bridge)
Ain’t in no rush to be fixed myself
My scars still have stories to tell
I don’t have answers, I won’t pretend
But if you can accept this imperfect man
(Chorus)
I'm here, I’m here
When the night hangs heavy, the road’s unclear
I can’t fix what’s broken, but I ain’t goin’ nowhere
Yeah, I’m here
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I like this - it’s a common scenario so, relatable to listeners.
Okay, if this was my song, I’d rework verse 2. May focus on the meaning of the first two lines for the whole verse. Contrast in comparison
April 21, 2026
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DeeDee Beeler
I like this - it’s a common scenario so, relatable to listeners.
Okay, if this was my song, I’d rework verse 2. May focus on the meaning of the first two lines for the whole verse. Contrast in comparison
April 21, 2026
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