Me, trying to write a Bo Diddley song. Just having fun. Love his style!
I would appreciate any feedback y’all have.
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In The Rain
(Verse)
Saw lightning strike a tree
Kinda like you burned me
Heard a sparrow start to scream
In the rain
(Verse)
Felt thunder shake my bones
Windows rattling in their homes
One more time called your phone
In the rain
[Chorus]
Look what loving you put me through
Muddy jeans, soggy boots,
All that hurt, nothing gained
Heart all broken and soaking in the rain
(Verse)
Heard a fiddle playing fast
As a car went splashing past
Suddenly began to laugh
This is insane
[Bridge]
When I opened my contact list, epiphany washed over me
Raindrops on my screen found your name
Said good for me, I hit delete
I hit delete, I hit delete
[Chorus]
Look what loving you put me through
Muddy jeans, muddy boots,
All that pain down the drain
No more moping or soaking in the rain
[Outro]
Rain, rain go away, come again another day
Rain, rain go away, come again another day
Come again another day
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