This is a work tape…my original head spun and home brewed lyrics. Female vocal but could he easily converted to male also with a few lyrical changes and melody rework. Hope you enjoy. Still under construction. Thanks
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Ascap #1234801971
Dear self pity, man I feel sorry for youuuuu
I resent that you make me feel sorry toooo
Its frustrat’in to see the pieces of me I gave up,
the Progress I undid try’n to keep his love
Oh Sadness- you were the first to show on my face,
Now Im fitting mad with my fists full of rage
They say ya dont know what ya got til its good and gone
I didnt know love’n someone so right, could end up so wrong
I lent him pieces of my soul, soaked in my devotion,
he moved on and Im still here
Just goin through the emotions
Dear self worth, its good to see you.
where the hell have you been this last month or two
Hey there contentment, have you seen happiness?
I think shes overdue, hope she gets here fast
Its been no joyride, dealing with this misery
He took off and left me broken memories
They say ya dont know what ya got til its good and gone
I didnt know love’n someone so right, could end up so wrong
I lent him pieces of my soul, soaked in my devotion,
he moved on and Im still here
Just goin through the emotions
I could numb myself
with a bottle of top shelf
But I wanna feel every single pain,
No indiff’rence over lovin’ again
They say ya dont know what ya got til its good and gone
I didnt know love’n someone so right, could end up so wrong
I lent him pieces of my soul, soaked in my devotion,
he moved on and Im still here,
just goin through the emotions
Yeahhhh
I lent him pieces of my soul,
He left with them and now im unwhole
He moved on with my heart, soaked up my devotion
Im still here just going through the emotions
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