A song about a tender and lasting love inspired my own love story with my hubby of 34 years. Could be male/female or duet. Still working on lyrics. (Original home brewed lyrics set to Suno Pro melody/vocals for editing purposes)
Always welcome feedback.
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(This can be a male/female duet or solo performance by male or female—I have both versions
available as work tape demos if needed)
They were eighteen, wild and free, living without fear
Dreaming of leaving that small town,
Their future was so clear
Those summer nights
Without parking lights
spent Learning bout each other
he swore it then
N’ still swears it now
There'll never be another
You--baby
No one can compare
No how, nowhere
You Get me like no one else ever has
Yeahhhh
You Were my first real love
ohhhhhh
and I swear you'll be
my last
mmmm mmm---
Young married life sure ain't no joke
Makes ya tired n’leaves ya broke
a stack of bills already late
kids are crying, and that can’t wait
one needs a bath
the other needs fed
They're Hangin on by a thread
Holding on to each other
she swore it then
N’ still swears it now
There'll never be another
You--baby
No one can compare
No how, nowhere
You Get me like no one else ever has
Yeahhhh
You Were my first real love
ohhhhhh
and I swear you'll be
my last
mmmm mmm---
This life they created keeps them
on their toes
No matter how crazy it gets,
each hopes the other knows
You--baby
No one can compare
No how, nowhere
You Get me like no one else ever has
Yeahhhh
You Were my first real love
ohhhhhh
and I swear you'll be
my last
mmmm mmm---
they swore it then
and still swear it now
They saved the best for the last
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