January 31, 2025
Genre: Pop
Pretty song. Needs strong female voice. Had to sing it in my "questionable" falsetto. With everyone screaming and insisting to be heard at the top of their voice, this is just a quiet, humble request.
"I have no peers" how can I possible allow feedback. I looked up the definition of "feedback" i.e. "it's that sustained, ringing tone, varying from a low rumble to a piercing screech". Why would anyone request that????
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- PLEASE -
YOU TAKE MY HAND...AND THAT'S A START
TO HEAL THE EVER BREAKING HEARTS
YOU UNDERSTAND..THE HARDEST PART
THIS IS THE WAY IT OUGHT TO BE
PLEASE...PLEASE..THIS IS THE WAY IT OUGHT TO BE
PLEASE...PLEASE..THIS IS THE WAY IT'S GOT TO BE
WE ARE THE SAME..WE ALL BELIEVE
WE WANT OUR CHILDREN TO LIVE IN PEACE
IF WE CAN CHANGE..AND EVERYONE AGREE
THIS IS THE WAY IT OUGHT TO BE
PLEASE...PLEASE..THIS IS THE WAY IT OUGHT TO BE
PLEASE...PLEASE..THIS IS THE WAY IT'S GOT TO BE
PLEASE..PLEASE..THIS IS THE WAY IT'S GOT TO BE
THIS IS THE WAY...
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