My dad just retired and I wanted to honor him by writing this song.
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V1
He’s 60 years old today
still works from dust till dawn
livin day to day
it’s the way he was raised
He gives all that he’s got
to give his kids a fighting shot
and he’ll never stop
Chorus
The working man you see
is who I want to be
He provides for his family
and get down on his knees.
He prays every night
He’s honest and he’s kind
His love’s contagious
That’s my Dad
The world could use some more men like that.
V2
He does things all the way
Makes time for his wife
on year number 38
love seems to never die
He gives all that he’s got
He said it may not be a lot
But he’ll never stop
Bridge
Yea he’s a fighter
He’s a lighter in the dark
Shining bright with the kindest heart
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