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"Every Other"
I don’t miss you every day
But I do every other
Enough to keep you on my mind
As I sit and wonder
Where you are since you were mine
And I'd be your forever
I don’t think about you every day
Just every other
CHORUS
Every other second, every other minute
Every hour that pass away
Since you’ve been gone
Time marches on
My heart can't keep pace
The sand will drop
The ticks will tock
There goes another
I don’t think about you every day
Just every other
VERSE
I try to hide between the lies
Say it's not forever
This hurt in time will surely pass
And we'll be back together
It's a thought that comes and goes
Fleeting as a flicker
But I don't hang on every one
Just every other
CHORUS
Every other second, every other minute
Every hour that pass away
Since you’ve been gone
Time marches on
My heart can't keep pace
The sand will drop
The ticks will tock
There goes another
I don’t think about you every day
Just every other
Bridge
Without you, it's just time
And I'm a criminal paying for my crime
This solitary sanity ain't no place to hide (escape)
Every second, every minute every hour of every day
CHORUS
Every other second, every other minute
Every hour that pass away
Since you’ve been gone
Time marches on
My heart can't keep pace
The sand will drop
The ticks will tock
There goes another
I don’t think about you every day
Just every other
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Allan Rosensweig
Great song Brad! Love the idea and the lyrics. Good job
December 27, 2022
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