I saw someone asking the general question on my fb feed: Did you see the moon last night? and I wrote this....I think the moon brings us peace and a reminder of a higher being/power/God
All feedback appreciated!
This is awesome, great song, the recording has great space too. A great piano and vocal also. Well done.
August 09, 2022
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Did You See the Moon Last Night
Writer: Carey Latham
CH
Did you see the moon last night
Lookin like a flashlight, Over the city
Like a guiding light, like some kind of sign
Did you see the moon last night
V1
It’s so easy to get puffed up, just wakin’ up
Like we’re in control of what our day holds
It’s so easy to feel wiped out, come sundown
When we try to take it all on by ourselves
Left with cards we wanna fold
CH
Did you see the moon last night
Lookin like a flashlight, Over the seas
Like a guiding light, like some kind of sign
Did you see the moon last night
V2
It’s so easy to just fall asleep, not hit our knees
Not talk to God about our fears and thoughts
It’s so easy to (sometimes) forget, we've got a friend
If we (just) raise our hand above the helplessness
We don’t have to bare the cross
CH
Did you see the moon last night
Lookin like a flashlight, Over the world
Like a guiding light, like some kind of sign
Did you see the moon last night
Bridge
Imagine the moment
Every eye up in amazement
Laying down fruitless labor
Finally meeting our maker
CH
Did you see the moon last night
Looking like a candlelight, Over the city
Like a guiding light, like some kind of sign
We’re gonna be alright
We’re gonna be alright
CH (FULL CHOIR)
Did you see the moon last night
Lookin like Heaven’s light
Over the city, over the seas, over the world
Like a guiding light, like (some kind) a sign
We’re gonna be alright, we’re gonna be alright
Did you see the moon last night
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This is awesome, great song, the recording has great space too. A great piano and vocal also. Well done.
August 09, 2022
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Valentine Sheldon
Really great song and demo. Congrats!
June 22, 2022
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